Whew! I finally completed the second version of my novel. I feel good about this. I listened to my beta-readers and I think I covered all their questions. In addition, I added some necessary romantic spark and more situations to emphasize the theme of this story. I am pleased.
Next step: Handing this version to a new beta-reader (and beta-editor?), hoping there aren’t more questions to be answered.
Wish me luck!
![Memories: [Sept 2016 - Pienza, Italy] - I finally got to witness the famous Gioco di Cacio al Fuso in Pienza, Tuscany. A traditional game where four teams, dressed in medieval garb, compete using Pienza’s famous pecorino cheese. Contestants kneel on the floor and roll their wheel of pecorino to bring it as close as possible to an upright spindle. If you’re in Tuscany the first week of September, make the effort to visit the quaint and beautiful town, located south of Siena in the postcard picturesque area of Val d’Orcia. ✈️ I miss travel.
#pecorino #pienza #tuscany #travel #valorcia #cacioalfuso #italy #cacio #giocodicacioalfuso](https://www.magnusmade.com/wp-content/plugins/instagram-feed/img/placeholder.png)
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